Date Posted:13:19:41 07/12/02 Fri Author:Raphaela Author Host/IP: webcacheB07a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.169 Subject: Re: Lust Defines Us In reply to:
Ambrosia
's message, "Lust Defines Us" on 13:55:54 07/09/02 Tue
Well the rhythm of this poem mimics the content. A very mature piece for one so young.
Format and style work well, in addition to the images contained within.
Raphaela
>Up and down
>We tumble forth
>Lust makes us crave
>Passion makes us insane
>
>Blindly we stumble down
>No binds, no limits
>Flesh against raw flesh
>A cry releases the pressure
>
>Up and down
>We taste pure pleasure
>Yet experience pure pain
>For lust defines us-Ambrosia
