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Date Posted: 00:09:44 07/13/02 Sat
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.172.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.172
Subject: Re: Coming home
In reply to: CJ 's message, "Coming home" on 08:32:59 07/11/02 Thu

>I pondered over posting this, It's a song i have been
>working on. A little input may help otherwise i'm
>gonna send to the recycle bin.

CJ - hi, I think this works well on both levels,
a poem and a song. If heard by being read or sung to
a person female by the right male, could truly warm
leery hearts all over the world. The following
part of this below, really struck me
with warm glow thoughts and would not be
surprised if it would do so for many. Put it to
the right tune and I feel this could be positive dynamite!!! SuSanne

..."Take the moment where you stand
It's here to bring you peace
As solid as the break of day
As honest as your needs

Tie me down with lonesome words
Your spirits cold from wandering"...

However I might suggest dropping the 's'
from 'spirts' if that works for you?:-O
Perhaps quite romanatic since warmly honest?:-p
Good work both ways CJ!!!

>Coming Home

>Send the winds blowing cold
>Along the path where no man stroll
>Sing no more for yesterday
>Cry no more at night
>
>Take the moment where you stand
>It's here to bring you peace
>As solid as the break of day
>As honest as your needs
>
>Tie me down with lonesome words
>Your spirits cold from wandering
> If you want some kindness friend
>My ears are here for you
>
>Write a chapter on hopeless dreams
>You're only alone when you die
>I'll bring songs to warm your soul
>Tell the lies you want to hear
>
>Lovers we can always be
>Give you peace of mind
>Enough to cover up the hurt
>Keep you coming home
>
>� Coastaljoe

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