Date Posted:00:08:49 07/21/02 Sun Author:sp99 Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.111.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.111 Subject: Re: As In Books In reply to:
Raphaela
's message, "Re: As In Books" on 15:15:56 07/20/02 Sat
Raphaela,
Would it help to know in regards to this comment
of yours: "...particularly when the subject is of a contemporary nature"....that I gently state this was
written with the subject in mind being around
since the start of civilized humans [?] and much
older than just comtemporary? And I do thank you
for your words I listen to as wisely as I can! Susanne
>I think you have worked hard at improving your style
>and this is becoming evident in the tightening of
>lines and imagery. The use of question marks involves
>your readers forcing them to question their own
>opinions on such contemporary issues.
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>However, I still find it difficult to see the mixture
>of archaic language and style mixed with contemporary,
>particularly when the subject is of a contemporary
>nature, and this has this has the effect of giving a
>slightly stilted effect.
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>You certainly provide food for thought in the content
>and this could certainly inspire many a poem.
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>Raphaela
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