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Date Posted: 15:09:06 06/25/02 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB04a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.166
Subject: Re: The Blue Of The Clouds
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "The Blue Of The Clouds" on 09:42:18 06/24/02 Mon

I was enjoying this but felt cheated - I think you need to balance poem up and add a little more - or a more substantial last stanza.

R


>The mountain of your love
>is invisible now
>peaking clouds
>that run
>briskly
>to get out of the way
>
>(this is a constant theme with me –
>running clouds if you have noticed)
>
>They escape to blue
>and the blue to white
>above and
>beyond ..
>
>All needing them
>and ...
>
>so so much

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