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Date Posted: 21:54:52 07/07/02 Sun
Author: Harmony
Author Host/IP: ip68-7-207-170.sd.sd.cox.net / 68.7.207.170
Subject: Re: Does She Complain
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Re: Does She Complain" on 21:49:43 07/07/02 Sun

I suggest that you think twice before leaving criticism of any verse left here. I asked you to explain your characterization of certain lines in my poem as "adolescent." You failed to do so. Don't talk the talk if you can't walk the walk.


>Harm
>
>Its not this or that line, its really the entire
>content. You do have an excellent grasp of english
>and ability to express it super, and I think that is
>pretty fair and constantly known and understood, I
>think most of us know that. It just that with such a
>talent, and you can check this out with other guys or
>wits, the general subject is / seems lacking, and I'd
>love to see you write something a little more
>sophistocated. I mean this has got to be ringing
>bells with ya. No offense at all, it is the depth
>that could be improved, as a matter of fact as you say
>in your own poem. You know I admire you greatly. :)
>al

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