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Date Posted: 15:21:22 07/11/02 Thu
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB04a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.166
Subject: Re: Hemispheres
In reply to: Leisa*) 's message, "Hemispheres" on 23:03:37 07/09/02 Tue

I liked this. The contrasting colour imagery, together with the alliteration which draws attention to the language as well as the content.

Raphaela


>Hemispheres
>
>And there we are
>opposite
>ends of another moment
>never in sync
>when time wilts
>we meander
>small steps
>
>You dream black and blue
>mine; full of colour
>ripped from fresh flesh wound
>and boombox stereo sound
>waves that sink simultaneous
>symptomatic sentiment
>
>Leisa*)
>07.09.02

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