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Date Posted: 10:00:54 06/08/02 Sat
Author: Gemini
Author Host/IP: webcacheB11a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.173
Subject: Re: Transparent Gems
In reply to: SuSanne 's message, "Transparent Gems" on 09:04:26 06/08/02 Sat

Hi Susanne,
Not sure why you are so hung-up on this commenting lark.
I find if people like ones poem they usually comment.
It is much more difficult to comment if one doesn't like it, to comment constructively without being cruel takes skill, which most of us, (well me), dont have.
I like some of the topics you choose for your poetry but usually find the rhyming so forced as to make them uneasy on my lips, in my head.
No offence intended.

Gem.

> >color=indigo>
>TRANSPARENT GEMS
>
>
>Sitting, to wonder
>About my world
>Extended into others
>For which I unfurl.
>
>Do I do well?
>Or hurts unwitting hurl
>As preferring to imagine,
>Into your shoes I swirl.
>
>For a moment or two
>In empathy's sake
>Of joy or despair,
>Not to tie you to a stake.
>
>As some may think I do
>Which is so not my intent
>If part of a poetic chain
>Of understandings sending and sent.
>
>Perhaps some think I trash talk
>Within my poetic writings
>And they're too good to comment me
>Of my words set down as a paintings.
>
>And if so, what will be, will be
>That they also, of my comments to them
>Do not appreciate what they see
>So to them I now send
>Farewell good wishes .. of transparent gems.
>
>
>� SuSanne &*_*&
>
>8.6.02~smb.powell
>All rights reserved
> >color=indigo>

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Re: Transparent Gems -- sp99, 11:07:17 06/08/02 Sat