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Date Posted: 22:11:02 06/10/02 Mon
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.163.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.163
Subject: Re: Texture Of Thoughts
In reply to: D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) 's message, "Texture Of Thoughts" on 11:19:47 06/10/02 Mon

I love what you say about Poets
within this poem of yours David,
how well you wrote of the same feeling
I tried to express in my "Gurgling Waters",
However, You say it so much clearer than I
for which I must say, BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO....*smiles I*
Thank you!!!

SuSanne

>
>
>The textures of thoughts
>Bring the friction of being human
>In the coarseness of feeling
>We let our emotions fly free

>Riding waves so rough
>The tides take them up and down
>Like a yoyo
>Foaming for reaction

>Visualization ponders the landscape
>Inhibition rides colors of rainbows
>Painting sculptures of words
>In skies so visual
>We dance our selves free in expressions

>That dive into us in strength
>Spiraling in intensity that electrifies
>Charging us with the power
>To reach so deep within us
>We cry out in the combination

>Of such beauty that words come together
>Sending us in exhilaration
>In to the next combination
>Of magic spells
>Casting spells within the mind to think

>So fine of a process can develop
>That we can intercept the heavens
>Where the peace in us
>Flies its wings of angelic proportions
>To sometimes lose it to devilish ramblings

>Yes variety is the spice of life
>That takes us down different paths
>To excite and create moods so real
>That we hurt thinking of them
>And can fly off in ecstasy in the next verse

>In tears of joy we look back
>At the puzzle created before us
>From a billion possible combinations
>Calming the scenery within
>In the smile of contentment

>Yet we know that success will always lie
>In the next spurge of possible brilliance
>That will illuminate us beyond our grave of concern
>Into acceptance by some of the worth
>That our words share with others

>So destroy me if you will
>But the drive in me will succeed
>In the next generation of thinkers
>Who risk their independence to ponder
>In winds so powerful
>Our time here was blessed in its entirety

>Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
>D.Lester Young (06/08/02)
>Tuscaloosa, AL
>Copyright � D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)
>http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=501
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