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Date Posted: 22:49:40 06/10/02 Mon
Author: sp99
Author Host/IP: pool-63.53.97.163.nwrk.grid.net / 63.53.97.163
Subject: Re: Helen
In reply to: AAAAGGGSSS 's message, "Re: Helen" on 11:34:37 06/10/02 Mon

Well dear friend, I did not say you were ALL wrong
now did I?;-p I liked what you said here~
..."really like luscioius you might say, and the comparison of a young girl to wine is well almost sinful, but I guess she was although I havent had the oppuntunity to meet her in vision, yet, hehe :)."....and I must
admit, I did not get the impression of comparing the girl
to wine which means, I need to read Harmony's 'deeper than
what shown on the surface' poem again....*smile* Which
certainly, will not be a chore...just the opposite
I feel?:-D But that is one thing about you and Raphaela
working together I so like, you both give us things to
muse upon, which is 'way cool' to use an expression hear
about my neighborhood of Earth....*smile*. Later, sp99

>a killer message to us all who take the time to read
>Harmony. I thought all the message you relayed was
>really like luscioius you might say, and the
>comparison of a young girl to wine is well almost
>sinful, but I guess she was although I havent had the
>oppuntunity to meet her in vision, yet, hehe :). The
>whole message seemed to pour actually like sweetened
>wine left a mite too long in July or August hot sun to
>use idiomatic language that you seem to prefer. The
>one thins though great poet Harmony was the ending,
>achilles heal, which I think was the achilles heal of
>the poem ie you could have come up with a brighter
>better ending, just my thoughts, but I'm usually
>right, hehe smiling at ya, :) AAAGGGSSS/al

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Re: a Helen p.s. -- sp99, 22:56:36 06/10/02 Mon