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Date Posted: 09:59:59 06/11/02 Tue
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheB09a.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.168.171
Subject: Re: To My Muse...my 1st attempt at html
In reply to: icyheart 's message, "To My Muse...my 1st attempt at html" on 18:57:57 05/13/02 Mon

Well I converted Unicorn to accept HTML format for your poem and it certainly works a treat. I have only written a few using layout and may post them soon.

I like the balance of the sentiments in this - optimistic yet realistic.

Love the line

'Temptress of my manly instincts'

but the last two endlines say it all.

Raphaela





> “
To My Muse
>
>
>
>As a
>Flower of life
>You are my one red rose
>And everyone knows
>How I feel about
>A Rose

>****
>**
> **
>**

>A picture of beautiful innocence
>Is my hearts picture of you
>Lost somewhere inside me
>Is a picture of perfection
>Temptress of my manly instincts
>Causing loves sweet resurrection
>When I look deep inside of me
>I find you hiding in my mind
>Helping me to bridge the abyss of loneliness
>Allowing me to walk in the gardens of pleasure
>My love for you is beyond all possible measure
>Bound by invisible chains of love and devotion
>Giving to each other pain and pleasure as equals
>With fights to forget and make-ups to treasure
>Life together may not be a pleasure cruise
>But Princess you are my forever muse

>
>© IcyHeart
>05/13/02


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