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Date Posted: 00:06:07 06/16/02 Sun
Author: Raphaela
Author Host/IP: webcacheM04b.cache.pol.co.uk / 195.92.194.14
Subject: Re: Now That He Is Gone
In reply to: Harmony 's message, "Now That He Is Gone" on 18:51:04 06/15/02 Sat

This is so well written Harmony - perfect rhythm and rhyme and meter. It just flows of the tongue and is, in my opinion, a classic that should be published. Reminded me of the pre-Raphaelite writer/artist Elizabeth Siddall's 'Worn Out' - which is a favourite of mine.

Much enjoyed, thank you.

Raphaela



>Sleep, exhausted mistress,
>Now that he is gone,
>Love's memory shall refresh you
>When your renewal is done.
>
>Bye the dawn's melting
>Into newborn day.
>Rise with refreshed body
>Now he has gone his way.
>
>Tempt only empty shadows
>With your charm and glow.
>Your lover cannot love you
>Nor burn your candle low.
>
>Sweet repose awaits you,
>To your bed now creep,
>There his odor lingers
>To tempt you in your sleep.

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