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Date Posted: 20:43:12 06/19/02 Wed
Author: AAAAGGGSSS
Author Host/IP: dialup-63.208.82.203.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net / 63.208.82.203
Subject: Re: Voices
In reply to: Harmony 's message, "Voices" on 21:58:03 06/16/02 Sun

Heyyyyyyy Harm,

Well, one of the problems I have in the constructing of poems is tht I so easily get caught up in the language and how pretty it all can sound, mashing this and that together, BUT so frequently it also happens that these so called "pretty sounds" get in the way of what it is I'd like to say, get it ?? So , even though this tells a pretty picture of this dame who is in the midst of something relly horrific, the cling clang of the language, in SOME areas I feel, couldhave been modestly improved. Some logic problems I feel also existed here. Now, don't get me wrong dear Harm, it was all great and superb, but you might want to take into consideration what I said about the floweriness of the language interfering with the floweriness of the statement, :) Al

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