Subject: Re: Oh common Ant! Who Else?! |
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Adam
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Date Posted: 11:26:07 10/08/03 Wed
Author Host/IP: NoHost/12.41.194.119 In reply to:
anthony
's message, "Re: Oh common Ant! Who Else?!" on 09:41:22 10/08/03 Wed
At work no. I'm at work now and this is all I have time for... so what are you going to be at Bill's on Sat ?
>you sure do have a lot of free time at work huh
>
>ant
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>>Hey Ant,
>>
>>Who has been taking liberties with Jim's poems? Who
>>has wrote commentary, poked fun at, and all together
>>altered the words of Jim's elaborate poetry? Well, as
>>you referred to me before, the local crackhead.
>>
>>Site looks great.
>>
>>ps. I can't wait for the next poem. Jim, keep'em
>>coming.
>>
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>>>Whoever wrote this, you are the MAN!, its the
>funniest
>>>thing i heard in a long time, so much is going on , i
>>>really feel this one, the dialect, simple yet
>>>astounding, the meter, flawless, the hidden subject
>>>matter, infinately amusing, you must expose yourself;
>>>the speachless poet, for i will make you, the
>>>one........for a day.
>>>
>>>ant
>>>
>>>>>Oh dweawy storm...
>>>>>so qwiet,
>>>>>so out of the fowum...
>>>>>lamp light in my eywes
>>>>>nuting to say,
>>>>>jus' long mewodic sighs.
>>>>>Mewencholy feelings
>>>>>accompanied with fworescent
>>>>>ceiwings...
>>>>>and so I cwap
>>>>>qwiet...
>>>>>nuting said...
>>>>>for I am alone now..da beating of ma hart iz da
>onwy
>>>>sound.
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