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Date Posted: 20:52:49 01/21/01 Sun
>Bukowski,
> Great essay!. Definatly an interesting
>viewpoint,superb eloquence, left me wanting more.
>(which might be a good thing) I'd give it an "A",
>perhaps even an "A+" Yes, i guess you ARE a writer...
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>>the coach feels like a train, feels like a womb must
>>feel, gently rocking soft hum dark moving thru space.
>>time gets warped there while awake it slows to
>>snailpace, when you finally crawl in finally tired
>>enough to let go of the day time vanishes. you wake
>>when you stop. you hear the generator but not the
>>motor and its still. no light to let you know if its a
>>fuel stop or you're there. make your way to the front
>>and look thru the curtains watch the curious try to
>>peer in and then you feel it all, what was womb in
>>movement is zoo at standstill. once a group of fans
>>with mob mentality decided to rock a bus, must of
>>thought, 'we'll get them outta there..' they pushed
>>and pushed at it like ants trying to drag a mouse down
>>the hole. what takes over in the fanatic's brain, what
>>causes the stampedes and hair pulling all the
>>craziness. are people so starved so out of touch with
>>their own creative cores that someone else's
>>spark/drive/talent turns them to hyenas, circling,
>>screaming for blood, for love. begging for the god
>>they made themselves to make them whole. and it doesnt
>>happen never happens because theyre the only ones that
>>can make themselves whole but that awareness never
>>comes and the ache is never salved, and the thirst
>>wont be quenched and they move from place to place
>>from band to band, emptying everything around them,
>>turning over every stone except the one inside them.
What she said, except for the "leaving me wanting more being a good thing", don't ever leave me wanting more... anyway, I love it, would you mind terribly if I told everyone that I wrote it? (It would make people think I am a smart, compassionate and perceptive.) I would like to put it on my site somewhere, maybe in the upcoming "safety deposit box" page that is in the planning stages. ( yes I do plan things) I think your name should be Ikswokub, or bukowskiwoman I mean isnt that some sort of fan-rule? We do need our very own Polish/Russian (like there's a difference!LOL!!) person, maybe one that could teach us how to say "love you guys!" and "peace out" in Polish. Anyway, If you write something else, you can put it up here and we will all go ga-ga over it, your very deep, your very profound, your very serious. Can you write anything wack?
We love wack.
Love you guys!!!
Peace out!!!
No one
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