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Date Posted: 14:00:58 03/11/01 Sun
Author: bluegem
Subject: Re: Looking Into The Mirror
In reply to: Singing Sparrow 's message, "Looking Into The Mirror" on 15:06:06 03/10/01 Sat

Wow... such a beautiful longing... I love the way you blending the "now" with the "hopeful future"... =)
really enjoyed these lines especially,
"Against the pearl-stained window of eternity’s hologram, I sway with her in true loves sighting
Giggling softly, knowing we both truly have each other, it’s just a matter now of me finding her, as she will find me"... you have a great voice in your writing, and of course the ending lines were perfect for your piece,
"O’ the magic mirror on the wall, showing me the one true one I’ll love forever
My future love, just out of reach through the thickness of time…"... love that last line the most... =)

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