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Date Posted: 14:11:55 03/11/01 Sun
Author: bluegem
Subject: Re: A sunset shared with you
In reply to: Ian B Saxon 's message, "A sunset shared with you" on 03:27:26 03/10/01 Sat

I was a little lost at the ending, not knowing where the tires came from, but upon reading some other comments, you said you were traveling, so explains it... perhaps say something in the the opening about driving, traveling, or such to set a clearer image if you use that last line without explaination beforehand... Wonderfully written piece, very strong and vivid, now knowing a bit about the story behind the writing... =)

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