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Date Posted: 19:08:44 03/20/03 Thu
Author: andy rysdam
Subject: Re: Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)
In reply to: Mrs. G. 's message, "Becoming Shakespeare: Write Your Own Sonnet (LESSON 4)" on 15:01:03 01/02/03 Thu

>After reviewing the characteristics of a sonnet,
>compose an original Elizabethan (Shakespearean) sonnet
>of 14 lines. Your theme may be traditional (i.e.,
>love, nature, etc.) or contemporary, but you must use
>the correct rhyme scheme (ababcdcdefefgg) and iambic
>pentameter. When you are finished, post your sonnet
>as a reply to this message. Get creative and have fun!

alrigt heres the deal. i cant even compare to the intelligent poems peopel have been writing here, so i went for originality on this one. i decided not to write about some chick and how hot she is or whatever, cuz everyone else does that and i bet it gets boring for people to read. (Mrs G, if you want me to redo this i will, i know it doesnt exactly fit the requirements, its easily the dumbest thing ive ever written)

Jelly Donut

My love for you goes round like your figure
Your soft creamy center filled with jelly
Is it just physical? I am unsure
Your sight makes me want you in my belly
With your superb tastes and savory looks
Your juicy insides are almost too good
I give props to your creator – the cook
My heart falls even though you are just food
Your glaze is like ice on a winter pond
Sweet to the taste and easy on the eyes
The love wont end, we share a special bond
Woohoo! You are on sale what a surprise
How do I love thee so deep? I dunno
But I will never part from your great dough

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