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Subject: HEART-SPOKEN .......virgin.......


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Gracefy girl
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Date Posted: 04:56:21 05/16/03 Fri

Below is my virgin poem ------------------------------

>>> Heart-spoken <<<

The modesty harvests sympathies
Arrogances spread aggressiveness

The winner must be unpretentious
Loser is difficult to be magnanimous

The Creator had created religions
Human just self-expressions

The religion makes us religious
God allow me to create of arts

The sympathetic adds self-popularities
Inner beauty keeps good personalities

The spiteful bears self-fallacies
Greediness shatters present greatness

>>>>>>> Daratista has my sympathy
>>>>>>> Popular sympathies are on her side

From : -“ The Little Girl Gracefy “-
By : - Gracefy girl -


>>> Kata-hati <<<

Kerendahan hati menuai banyak simpati
Arogansi banyak menebar sikap agresi
( Keangkuhan banyak menebar serangan antipati )

Pemenang harus rendah hati
Pecundang sulit murah hati

Sang Pencipta telah ciptakan religi
Manusia sekedar ekspresikan diri

Agama membuat kita mengimani
Allah ijinkan daku ciptakan seni

Sifat simpatik menambah ketenaran diri
Kecantikan hati menyimpan kebaikan pribadi

Sifat dengki membuahkan kekeliruan sendiri
Ketamakan hancurkan kejayaan masa kini

>>>>>>> Simpatiku Daratista
>>>>>>> Simpati semua ada di pihaknya

Dari : -“ Doa Dara Belia “-
Oleh : - gadis Gracefy / dara pendoa -

Below was the correction poem --------------------

>>> HEART-SPOKEN <<<

Modesty harvests sympathies
Arrogance spreads aggressiveness

Winners must be unpretentious
Losers tends to be magnanimous

The Creator developed religions
for human to express themselves

Religion makes us to believe oneness
that God allows us to create arts

Sympathetic adds self-popularities
Inner beauty keeps good personalities

Spiteful bears self-fallacies
Greediness shatters present greatness

>>>>>>> Daratista, We sympathize
>>>>>>> Popular sympathies are on her side

From : -“ The Little Girl Gracefy “-
By : - Gracefy girl -


>>> Kata-hati <<<

Kerendahan hati menuai banyak simpati
Keangkuhan menebar serangan antipati

Pemenang harus rendah hati
Pecundang sulit murah hati

Sang Pencipta telah ciptakan religi
buat manusia ekspresikan diri

Agama membuat kita mengimani
bahwa Allah ijinkan kami ciptakan seni

Sifat simpatik menambah ketenaran diri
Kecantikan hati menyimpan kebaikan pribadi

Sifat dengki membuahkan kekeliruan sendiri
Ketamakan hancurkan kejayaan masa kini

>>>>>>> Daratista rasa hati kita
>>>>>>> Simpati semua ada di pihaknya

Dari : -“ Doa Dara Belia “-
Oleh : - gadis Gracefy / dara pendoa -

Hallo Tutor Dolly and Mr. Doctor Edi also the others, how are you ?
Would you help me to make it perfect and beautiful ?
Please check and correct first.
I wait for your suggestions, ok…
Thanks for your attentions and criticisms
See you later !... wise guys... next poem

Yours faithfully

Gracefy / Kata-hati

Note :
Jangan lupa versi Indonesianya juga lho

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