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Date Posted: 11:54:35 10/18/02 Fri
Author: 路路老人
Subject: 好一首馬屁詩，我來評一評！
In reply to:  's message, "饱├璊い枷诀" on 10:56:32 10/08/02 Tue

>誰言未振中？慕義更爭公：
>孤稚教無類，六宗催大同。
>髓枯遺體白，血沸染衣紅。
>今後天堂上，常通諸聖功。

詩悼樞機真費神，清平社長假誠心。古人不見今時月，今月何必照古人！
生人借死人自重，自古有之，世有張角，後有南華老仙！詠人自詠，也就見怪不怪！誰言神職人員不可搞個人崇拜，死後亦然，惟馬屁者識之！安息乎？
要拍拍得好，拍不好，拍個屁！誠如貴社社長這首詩，真是馬屁好，好個屁！
以詩論詩，五六句用字凶險，勉強成句，寫得體無完膚，非惟有失敦厚，實對死者不敬！尾二句馬屁不通，不知所云，詩者水平立見！
不過值得讚賞的，是詩者的諧音不錯，功力菲然！
振中姓胡，當然不必振中，還有誰云可言？第一句顯然多餘，但讀起原似「雖然未盡忠」！第二句馬屁拍過龍，馬上對一句「無義更爭功」，為死者蓋棺論定，用心良苦也！三四句批得更狠「顧住搞舞女，碌啫吹大蟲」，難怪「除褲唯體白」然後「血沸染衣紅」！妙哉奇哉怪哉，堪稱屁王！

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