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Date Posted: 08:52:52 10/19/02 Sat
Author: 社長
Subject: Re: 中秋寄月
In reply to: 太遲了 's message, "中秋寄月" on 06:31:34 10/19/02 Sat

溶溶一縷月
縷縷結千絲

很好，月似溶化了一樣，清新。

可惜「解君惆悵時」出律了。

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Replies:

可否指教應如何修正? -- 請賜教, 17:35:54 10/21/02 Mon
- Re: 可否指教應如何修正? -- 社長, 17:49:02 10/21/02 Mon
  - 再請教>>> -- 請賜教, 18:00:56 10/21/02 Mon
    - "仄平平仄平"犯了第四字孤仄,對嗎? (NT) -- 文津, 20:19:38 10/21/02 Mon
      - 對不起，我看錯了。 -- 社長, 22:41:45 10/21/02 Mon
        謝謝社長賞識, 我很樂意哦. -- 君言, 22:13:28 10/22/02 Tue
        請電郵本人，留下真實姓名及地址 (NT) -- 社長, 13:43:31 10/23/02 Wed
        請問社長郵址是否改了? (NT) -- 君言, 06:12:06 10/24/02 Thu
        已收到，謝謝支持 (NT) -- 社長, 16:01:54 10/24/02 Thu

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