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Date Posted: 09:56:09 02/19/02 Tue
Author: 弗雷多。考里昂
Subject: 拉牛上樹而已，謝陳大哥賜教，恭喜發財。
In reply to: 老陳來也 's message, "酌字" on 19:50:53 02/10/02 Sun

>詩詞用字少，所以每個字須力求精確。老弗既好此道，老陳也?>荋窵篹部A或對或錯，還望清平諸君指正。
>
>此詩做境不精確，矛盾處甚多，如上片寫的是關外大漠旅人，?>U片卻寫成室內傷愁的文人，塞外既說風淡，不應霜飛，既說霜
>飛，雲深茫茫，又如何可見秋霞?寫境矛盾，讀來就只有亂的感
>覺，而難以感受現場氣氛了。

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