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Date Posted: 13:03:26 02/22/02 Fri
Author: 豪爺爺
Subject: 代友寄余劍龍同門並依韻和其〈律詩〉一詩

支頤秉筆賦新詞，豈助騷壇風俗移？
莫道中阿菁者草，直須自歎無賢師。
（三平腳）
按：
（一）此詩指友人想寫好詩詞，但奈何賢師不願教他／她；而不是老師不賢。友人希望得賢師余劍龍傾囊相授，以通曉格律；
（二）「莫道」句化用《詩經‧小雅‧菁菁者莪》：「菁菁者莪，在彼中阿」，據韓愈《上宰相書》云：「說者曰．．．．．．言君子之長育人材，若大陵之長育微草，能使之菁菁然盛也。」；「莪」即「草」。所以這句不是我胡亂作的；
（三）在不合律處已標明「三平腳」。

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