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Date Posted: 21:50:58 07/28/02 Sun
Author: ~小魚
Subject: Re: 風花雪月
In reply to: 秘書長 's message, "Re: 風花雪月" on 10:01:27 07/28/02 Sun

>>明月遇清風
>>皎皎露光華
>>迴旋送丁香
>>嘯嘯翩起舞
>>琴瑟奏和弦
>>美樂此中尋
>
>風格類近五古，稍具漢魏之骨，但第二句與第三句之過度可以更佳，主體未明以至迴旋乏力。另押韻方面亦須琢磨。


主體意在暗喻知友人相知相惜的和諧境界, 也可以是寫愛情。心醉為何, 是為風花雪月之醉。

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