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Date Posted: 22:30:34 07/28/02 Sun
Author: 文津
Subject: 重寫
In reply to: ~小魚 's message, "窗前小雨" on 18:57:19 07/26/02 Fri

我查過詩韻,將這首詩也重寫了,請各位指正:

>夜涼帶雨露
>獨倚窗前醉
>懷想故人事
>夢魂何所至
>君若在窗前
>小雨飄吾淚
>答答呢喃雨
>滴滴離人意

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