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Date Posted: 19:26:38 07/29/02 Mon
Author: ~小魚
Subject: Re: 風花雪月
In reply to: 文津 's message, "Re: 風花雪月" on 22:09:23 07/28/02 Sun

>我查過詩韻,將此詩修改如下,請各位指正:
>
>>明月遇清風
>>皎皎露光華
>>迴旋送丁香
>>嘯嘯舞晚霞
>>琴瑟奏和弦
>>美樂繞輕紗

改為這樣如何?
第四句 : 翩翩舞晚霞
第六句 : 美樂伴輕紗

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Re: 風花雪月 -- 社長, 19:50:13 07/29/02 Mon
- Re: 風花雪月 -- ~小魚, 20:15:24 07/29/02 Mon
  - Re: 風花雪月 -- 社長, 22:55:02 07/29/02 Mon

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