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Date Posted: 20:40:43 07/31/02 Wed
Author: 文津
Subject: 第三次修改
In reply to: 文津 's message, "再修改" on 02:31:52 07/31/02 Wed

當我不是重寫小魚的詩,是自己創作吧!小魚有時間請看看"花間集",比"相吻丁香吐"更突兀的詞都有,好像"雖作一生拼,盡君今日歡",是描述男女床上歡愉,但沒有人說是淫詞,只覺情真."那邊"確實不好,那就改為"水邊":
>>>
>>>明月遇清風
>>>君愛霓裳舞
>>>皎皎光華水邊照
>>>美樂如仙府
>>>
>>>白紵舞翩翩
>>>相吻丁香吐
>>>憐愛卿卿趁好春
>>>道別依依雨

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