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Date Posted: 01:50:02 09/08/02 Sun
Author: 一些微辭
Subject: 你好像為賦新詞強說愁嘛!
In reply to: 文津 's message, "再修改" on 20:41:33 09/07/02 Sat

柳岸應在西子湖畔,
海角天涯如今是旅遊勝地,
北風也倘未翻得過秦嶺,
朱門只是博物館的門庭更順便做為展品;
世情早己變得莫名其妙,
千金散去不是還复來嗎?
(然則真有了千金,你倒未必捨得散);
除了, 你的愁腸是唯一無法駁倒的論點,
可是"酒入愁腸, 化做相思淚"已經是無出其右的經典了,
你還是和那些認為酒乃極純之物的人一起去開懷劈酒吧!

>>>淡雲高
>>>新月掛
>>>望眼紅塵似畫
>>>經柳岸
>>>歷天涯
>>>北風吹我懷
>>>
>>>千金散
>>>世情變
>>>酒入愁腸難斷
>>>樓黯黯
>>>院蕭蕭
>>>笑朱門寂寥

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  • 第三次修改(批評甚是,故不再強說愁) -- 文津, 22:12:13 09/08/02 Sun
  • "酒已清腸難喚" 句甚是. 不過更應嘗試一下稼軒"誰共我, 醉明月"的豪情. -- 多言人, 05:49:30 09/11/02 Wed
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