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Date Posted: 09:51:39 11/16/01 Fri
Author: 豪爺爺
Subject: Re: 即事
In reply to: 豪爺爺 's message, "即事" on 04:04:56 11/15/01 Thu

>九月廿五,大元村有車撞三人,二婦人斃。既遺其弱聽之子,?>G作詩以歎之。
>慈父抱前長痛哭,噩聞母逝斷腸腹。
>始知自此隔幽暝,反哺何能報苦育?
>(用三仄腳韻)

劍龍兄,您記得咱哥倆上鄺龑子的課時,我說一來「始知」跟「自此」雖同音,但皆為疊韻字,仿佛有種迴蕩的作用;二來這四個字的聲母皆是ts,四字連讀,宛如在寂寞之中,製造一些聲音,給自己安慰,正如李清照《聲聲慢》劈頭十四個疊字:「尋尋覓覓,冷冷清清,淒淒慘慘蹙蹙」一樣,而這一點是鄺龑子說的。其實我當時講得不大清楚,應該是:四個ts音,讀來很像局促驚惕悲愴的心情,收到仿似「哭」、「腹」和「育」的效果。您有甚麼意見?

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