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Date Posted: Friday, January 27, 11:39:56pm
Author: Diane
Subject: Chiming in late with another
In reply to: Shanola 's message, "What words 'throw' you out of a story?" on Wednesday, January 18, 06:53:52pm

During a sex scene:

"Nikita (fill-in-the-blank) to Michael. He screamed with pleasure."

'Screamed?' Michael Samuelle doesn't 'scream.' Ever. 'Yell?' Possibly. 'Cry out?' I'll accept that, though Nikita better have earned it. I'm also open to 'sighed,' 'moaned' and 'groaned.' But 'screamed?' Not so much.

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