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Date Posted: 17:21:14 05/07/03 Wed
Author: The Buffy Cross And Stake Authors
Author Host/IP: 80.192.98.23
Subject: Season Eight Fanfiction - Episode 8.12 - "Hotshot" by that one guy

Previously on Buffy:
Fade In:

(It's late at night. We hear a scream coming from an alleyway, then suddenly the dull thud of a body hitting the ground. Footsteps approach the main road out of the dark alley - we see boot-clad feet standing at the intersection between alley & road.
The camera scrolls up to see a man in a black silk shirt and black jeans, his eyes are ice cold blue, pitch black hair that is spiked up, his lips show a slight smirk sort of evil yet methodical. The other hand brings a cigarette to his lips where he takes a drag; leaving it there he begins to walk. The few people who are on the streets at this time of night go out of their way to be out of *his* way. He walks up to the crossing, where an old lady seems to be having trouble.)

Stranger: Can I help you across the street ma’am?

Old Lady: Oh! Why, yes, sonny!

(The camera fades back to show them crossing the street; the stranger has the old lady by the arm, just when they meet the other curb.)

Old Lady: Thank you.

Stranger: No problem.

(Then suddenly the Stranger flings the Old Lady into an incoming car causing her to go threw the windshield, and the car to spin into a near by fire hydrant.)

Stranger: I'd always wanted to do that. Felt good.

(The camera follows him, as he walks over to the car, calmly checking it out. There are moans coming from inside the crashed car. He walks around the back, and suddenly a round cap falls to the floor - you can hear a liquid dripping from the car onto the surrounding ground. )

(He takes one last drag on his cigarette, and then flicks it at the car, walking away. After a few steps, the car explodes in a fireball. The stranger carries on walking, a huge smile on his face.)

Black out:
Buffy Theme Song plays.

Fade in:

(Its morning and Giles is sitting at the diner in Buffy's kitchen, reading the paper. Dawn is at the sink, washing some dishes - Andrew is drying. Buffy and Faith come into the kitchen, dressed in training gear. Giles is engrossed in the paper.)

Faith: You coming, Jeeves?

Giles: Huh? Oh, sorry. I was just....(points at the paper)

Buffy: What's so thrilling about the news? Our lives are a walking TV show, isn't that enough?

Giles: But this story is particularly.....odd.

(Giles shows them the headline: “3 Dead in Car Crash”)

Andrew: Do they have pictures of the bodies? *glances at the paper* I think I'm going to be sick...

(Dawn just rolls her eyes at Andrew.)

Faith: Another day, another death. It's just one wacky world we live in.

Buffy: Are we suspicious?

Giles: That's what I've been trying to say. The report says they found the body of a girl, in a nearby alley - drained of blood. They're blaming a wild dog.

Faith: But we're thinking vamp.

Giles: I wouldn't assume these 2 events are as unconnected as the police reports say.

Faith: Yeah, cops around here really are as dumb as they look.

Buffy: So....a vamp who likes fire? A crazy, no-fear vampire. Great. Like we need another one of those.

Faith: They're the best kind, B.

Fade out.

(The gang are at the Magic Box. Faith & Buffy come in from the back - they've obviously been training. Anya is working at the register; Dawn and Willow are sitting at the table, going over a spell book. )

Faith: Hey, Dawnie, wanna play? We've got the moves...

Dawn: Not right now, Faith, I'm reading.

Faith: *to Buffy* When did she turn into Willow?

Anya: As long as she doesn't go all dark & veiny and suck all the useful bits out the merchandise, then I'm okay with it.

(Everyone looks at Anya.)

Willow: I'm sitting right here, you know.

Anya: I know. I was just pointing out that I'm not looking for a rerun that ends in the destruction of my shop....again.

(Giles comes in from the back.)

Giles: *Our* shop, Anya. I don't know how many times I can tell you this, we're co-licensers.

Anya: Isn't it time for another one of your "I'm going back to England" mood swings?

Giles: Anya...

(Faith & Buffy just smile at the bickering. Just then, the bell on the shop door rings - Xander comes in.)

Faith: Don't you guys ever get, like, customers?

Xander just looks at Faith. Faith glares back.

Dawn: Check out the friction.

Faith: Buffy, I'm going out back again. You with me?

Buffy: In a second.

(Buffy walks up to Xander.)

Buffy: What is going on with you lately? Ever since that night, at Amy's. You & Faith have been....

Xander: There was a thing. I'm surprised Little Miss Moral High Ground hasn't told you already.

Buffy: Well, why don't you tell me?

Xander: It's nothing. Honestly, talk to Faith. She's the one with the issues about it.

Buffy: Xander...

Xander: I've got things to do, Buffy. *to Willow* Hey, Will, you ready?

Willow: Yep.

Dawn: You're going?

Willow: Sorry, Dawnie, but some of us have college.

Dawn: Well, don't blame me if you come back and everybody else has been turned into various farmyard animals.

Anya: As long as I'm not a bunny.

(Willow & Xander leave. Buffy goes back into the workout room. Faith is busy with the punching bag.)

Buffy: Faith.

Faith: Yeah, B?

(Faith stops punching the bag.)

Buffy: Xander?

(Faith looks down for a second.)

Faith: It's nothing.....there was a thing.

Buffy: Have you guys been practising your answers or something?

Faith: It's just....issues.

Buffy: Care to expand?

(There's silence.)

Buffy: Look, Faith, I'm not expecting a novel here, just something –

Faith: *interrupts Buffy* It was at Amy's house. Xander.....did something he shouldn't have.

Buffy: That thing being...?

Faith: Doesn’t matter. But it was a stupid thing to do. I should know.

(Buffy just looks at Faith.)

Faith: We....talked about it. Gotta tell you, B, I don't know if I can trust him anymore.

Buffy: Was it that bad?

Faith: It reminded me of....me. The person I used to be. I don't want him to have to suffer through that.

Buffy: Xander's smarter than that.

Faith: You think so, huh?

Cut To:
(Summers' House: Andrew and Dawn are standing in the hallway, dressed like they're going out.)

Dawn: Buffy, how can I not celebrate? I got straight A's! And we'll be safe...

Buffy: Right. Like that time you were "safe" on Halloween...

Dawn: That was a.... thing. Look, I know how to handle myself against a vampire. And besides, Andrew can protect me if it comes to it.

(After a few seconds, everyone bursts into laughter. Except Andrew, who looks visibly hurt.)

Andrew: Hey! I know how to....ok, I don't.

(Before Buffy can change their minds, Faith cuts in.)

Faith: Relax, B, the juniors can take care of themselves. We've got bigger fish to fry. That vamp, remember?

Buffy: That's what I mean. The vamp is still out there.

Dawn: And if he comes for us....we'll knock him for six.

Faith: In that outfit - for sure.

(Spike comes in from the living room.)

Spike: What outfit? Oh.... Niblet's all growed-up.

(Buffy gives Spike a look.)

Spike: But not in a...you know....sexy way or anything....

Faith: *coughing* Jailbait?

(Dawn laughs. )

Spike: If I had circulation, I'd be going red right now...

Faith: Don't stress. *to Buffy* Look, if anything happens to them, hold me responsible, kay?

Buffy: *pause* Fine. Enjoy yourself. Sorry I can't come with.

Dawn: Nah, its fine. Just remember, when I graduate, you're *all* coming.

Buffy: I have issues with graduation ceremonies....

(Dawn grabs Andrews arm and they walk out. As they shut the door, the screen fades)

Fade In:
(Outside the Bronze, about 5 Vampires (all male) look scruffy all dressed in jeans and tee shirts, who are vamped out and look hungry, surround Dawn and Andrew. )

Andrew: You don’t want to do this, her sister's the Slayer and if you hurt us she’ll kill you all.

Vamp 1: She doesn’t look like she’s around her to stop us. Besides - we're hungry.

Vamp 2: Yeah.

Vamp 3: We could always wait for the Slayer to come - she could fill us right up...

Vamp 5: Who cares?! Let’s just eat 'em! Nobody's gonna stop us.

Stranger: (VO) Now, now, don't be too sure.

(The Vampires all turn their attention to the stranger and one of them growls. He stands on a pile of empty alcohol crates.)

Stranger: I’d calm down, Fido, before someone rips out your voice box.

Vamp 5: I’d love to see you try.

Stranger: Wouldn't wanna disappoint...

(Dawn and Andrew look on in shock.)

Stranger: Got to warn you though, you're not going to win, and the only way you’ll survive this fight is if I let you.

Vamp 1: Ah, does the big bad man think he some kind of Slayer?

Vamp 3: Yeah, I think he does.

Vamp 2: Well we’ll teach him otherwise.

Vamp 5: Can we stop talking and just kill him?!

(The Stranger sighs at them.)

Stranger: *under his breath* This is going to be too easy - these guys are, well… pathetic.

(Vamps 1 and 3 come running at him, he jumps off the crates and holds out both of his arms. As he takes a step forward, he grabs them and throws them over his back, and they crash into the wooden crates. Splinters pierce their bodies, dusting them.)

Stranger: Yeesh, got to hate it when that happens.

(Vamp 2 steps up but before he can react the Stranger has one hand on his shoulder the other on his jaw as he lets out a fierce roar and pulls the vamps head from his shoulder.)

Stranger: Come on people you’re not even trying, I mean who’s the Big Master in these parts?

Vamp 4: Should we tell him?

Vamp 5: He won't live long enough to...

(Before he could finish the sentence a piece of the broke crate was hurled at him and he burst into dust.)

Stranger: Congratulations! You've reached the bonus round! For 20 extra blood bank points, can you tell me - who is your Master?!

Vamp 4: She goes by the name of Raven.

He smiles for a second.

Stranger: That was too easy. Well, be a team player and go and tell that bitch, Terral is here. I’ve got everything taken care of. She doesn't need to worry, my end of the deal will be upheld. Oh, and tell her she can go to Hell right after I'm done here. In a picnic basket, if that’s her thing.

Vamp 4: Yes.

(The Vampire nods his head and scurries off in the opposite direct.)

Andrew: Why, thanks…

Dawn: Yeah.

Andrew: We’ll just be going now…

Terral: Nah, stay and have bite to eat with me.

Andrew: No, its ok it’s really late and the Slayer is expecting us.

(Terral takes a few stepped forward.)

Terral: Hey I got a message for her too! Tell her that she should find Raven, before she starts something that well, no one will be able to finish.

(After he finishes that statement he clocks Andrew in the head and snatches Dawn in his arms and covers her mouth she can feel his cold dead hands.)

Terral: Hush now, be a good girl - don’t scream and you’ll make it out of this alive; make a scene and if someone tries to stop me I kill them and then you. Catch my drift sweet pea?

Dawn: *nods*

Terral: Good. Now, I’m going to remove my hand and you're going to walk with me.

Fade out of them walking down a dark alley.

Fade in.

The vampire comes running into Raven's lair. He sees Raven talking to Amy.

Vamp 4: Your excellences.

Amy: Oh, great, a lackey.

Raven: What is it?

Vamp 4: I’ve got some bad news, we were about to take out the Slayer's kid sister and a friend when this guy came out of nowhere. He single handedly killed the others. He also sent me back with a message.

Raven: Well then? Tell me what he said!!

Vamp 4: He said "Terral is here. I’ve got everything taken care of. She doesn't need to worry, my end of the deal will be upheld. Oh, and tell her she can go to Hell right after I'm done here. In a picnic basket, if that’s her thing."

(An evil grin widens on her face and it goes to shock.)

Raven: I try to be nice to him and yet he’s always an ass to me!

Amy: Who's this Terral?

Raven: Nobody important. At least he’ll do his job and distract those idiots long enough for me to get it done.

Amy: You hired someone?! Without passing it by us?

Raven: Not exactly hired....he owes me. Owes me plenty.

Amy: Well....just don't do it again. This is meant to be a partnership.

Raven: *under her breath* I need out of this deal...

(The Four Horsemen enter the lair. Amy goes up to meet them, leaving Raven and the vamp in the background.)

Amy: You got it?

James: Certainly did.

Amy: So we're almost there...

Sarah: Indeed we are. There are just a couple of things we need to start the ritual...

Amy: Oh, don't worry - you'll have both of those things.

(All 5 of them turn around to look at Raven).

Amy: Trust me on that.

COMMERCIAL BREAK: The Slayer Smartie wanders on screen. "Why doesn't anybody wanna slay with me?" "Because you killed the Skittle!!" "Bitter much?"

Fade In

(Summers' House: Andrew walks through the front door, staggering, all bruised. Buffy comes to the door, closely followed by Faith & Spike.)

Buffy: Hey guys did you have a.... Where's Dawn?

Andrew: We had some trouble, Buffy. Some vampire took Dawn, said he had something to tell you. Something about finding Raven.

Faith: Like we haven't been trying. *pause* Good thing you came back though, we were about to go on patrol...we can look for this son of a bitch...

Andrew: Oh! And he had a name! Terral. He looked kinda gothic...too much black...

(Spike gets a wide-eyed look on his face.)

Buffy: He’s as good as dead since we're all going after him.

Andrew: Isn't anybody proud that I did something useful?

(Buffy looks at him.)

Buffy: Like getting my sister taken? Yeah, we're real proud.

Spike: Buffy, I don't think its such a good idea that we all go after this one vampire. Terral, he's...pretty fierce. I met him once, back in the day. He was totally wild - he'd hunt anything, not just humans. He was all for killing demons & vampires too - and he didn't have a chip.

Faith: I think the 2 of us can handle him. Bet he's never dealt with 2 Slayers before.

(Giles comes in from the living room.)

Giles: What's all the commotion about?

Faith: Dawn got kidnapped by some random vampire –

Andrew: - called Terral.

Faith: - and we're going after him.

Giles: Uh, wait a minute. Not so fast, people. I think the majority of our efforts should be concentrated on Raven. She and the Four Horsemen are a pretty bad combination for us.

Buffy: So what do you suggest? Leaving Dawn in danger just because there are bigger things out there?

Giles: I'm not saying that - and Dawn can take care of herself. She's shown that before. *pause* Faith can look for Terral. The rest of us should concentrate on finding Raven and The Horsemen.

Buffy: Wait a minute… Dawn's my sister. I should be out there looking for her.

Faith: Don't worry B. You need to be here, I said I'll be held responsible for any trouble...

Giles: You're too emotionally involved, Buffy. I don't want you slipping up.

Buffy: So I just sit here and worry then? Great fun.

(Buffy walks into the living room.)

Spike: Faith - be careful. This Terral - he's dangerous. A capable and strong vampire. If you're not concentrating, then...

Faith: Relax. It'll go fine.

(Outside, Xander & Willow are coming up to the front door.)

Xander: So, whatever's in the factory has the crew scared. Reconstruction's been put back a week.

Willow: That sucks. *looks at the front door* Hey, Faith!

(Faith walks past them.)

Xander: Where are you going?

Faith: To find a girl.

(Fade in to a factory.)

Dawn: No way! She sired you?

Terral: Yeah, kid, its true. I'm the childe of a Vamped Slayer. Her first.

Dawn: So....do you have any special powers and stuff?

Terral: *laughs* Wouldn't you like to know... I have, 'abilities'. Lets just leave it at that.

Dawn: Um....can I ask a question?

Terral: Go on, I'm listening...

Dawn: I saw you fight those vamps, you were stronger. Much stronger. If you have all that power - why don't you have minions like Raven?

Terral: Because I’m anti social. And, actually, I don’t prefer to be around idiots all day. You know how hard it is to teach the younger generations to listen to you? Most of them just want to hunt, and kill.

Dawn: You sound like The Master!

Terral: Not that wanker...

Dawn: You know him?

Terral: There was a thing....I went through this phase, joined his Order.... you ever heard of Darla? No, don't suppose you would've...

(There's a short silence.)

Dawn: You know, if I wasn't chained up, I'd be fighting you. Faith's taught me the moves....

Terral: Said it yourself - you're chained up.

Dawn: Well... Buffy's going to kill you when she finds us.

Terral: And you're sure of that how? You said it yourself, I'm stronger than your garden-variety vampire.

Dawn: You can’t be *that* strong. Against 2 Slayers, and a Potential? No way.

Terral: A what? *pause* Never mind...

(Another silence.)

Dawn: So what was she like?

Terral: Who?

Dawn: Raven.

Fade out

(Fade in: The Horsemen and Amy are standing in the cavern. Raven isn't around.)

Amy: You've got the book?

Martin: Yes. There's just one thing left....

Amy: Don't worry. It's all set up - as we planned.

Martin: Good.

(The Horsemen leave the cavern.)

Amy: I'll be glad to see the back of her, frankly.

(Cut to normal day.)

Terral: After that she, became something different.

Dawn: Then why do you hate her?

Terral: I was there the day she killed her first Slayer. I was there the day she became a bitch. At first she wasn’t bad - she was nice when she was first sired. But then, she got this idea that I should be her slave. Said it was because she sired me and all. That’s something I hate to admit, by the way. She tried to force stuff on me and she became too big for herself. She deserved to die. She became cocky - and, well, just plain horrible.

Dawn: But she's survived this long....

Terral: What makes you think she's survived this long?

Dawn: Well....you know, dusted vampires don't tend to be able to kick butt the way she does.

Terral: Well, FYI, she did die. It was in the 1740...

(Cut to 1740, Germany)

(Raven is fighting a Slayer, who wears all red, with blond hair and greyish eyes. As the fight wears on, they exchange plenty of blows until Raven grabs the Slayer and pulls her close to her. Just as she begins to drink, an arrow slams into her back, and pierces her heart. She looks shocked for a second, then turns to dust. The Slayer recovers quickly, and sees her Watcher holding a longbow.)

(Cut back to the present day.)

Terral: ...and then I killed the Watcher.

Dawn: Why?

Terral: Do I need a reason? I'm a vampire!

Dawn: Not for long. You just wait till I get out of these chains....they've been training me, you know.

Terral: They being the Slayers, I presume.

Dawn: Buffy and Faith - teaching me to slay and everything.

Terral: Speaking of Slayers... I have a meeting to attend. I’ll be back. And if you're good, I'll have treats!

Fade out.

Fade in.

(Faith is walking through the alley that Terral was in at the beginning of the episode. Suddenly, a vampire jumps her from the darkness. The vamp lunges quickly to bite her, closing his eyes. When he’s about a half-inch from her neck his eyes open widely and he bursts into dust. Faith tosses the stake up into the hair, but it doesn't come back down. She glances up, just in time to see Terral drop down on her. They tussle, with Faith eventually gaining the upper hand, straddling him on the ground as she holds a stake to his heart. She glances at his clothes and hair.)

Faith: I'm guessing you're Terral.

Terral: Wow! You're bright for a fighting machine.

Faith: What do you want?

(Terral thinks for a moment before responding. )

Terral: Why, you, beautiful! Or was that not the correct answer? Hmm… what do you say we go somewhere dark and dank and do it like bunnies?

Faith: Eww. How about if I kill you instead?

Terral: Is it that whole "I’m dead" thing thats the turn off, or is it the fact that you don’t like Dark and Dank places? Or do you have a fear of bunnies? I once met a demon chick with a bunnyphobia, really strange lady.... Anyway, I dont really feel like killing you. You're good looking. If I kill all the good looking people, all that's left is the ugly ones. I hate ugly people.

Faith: You're hardly an oil painting yourself.

Terral: That's right, make fun of the vampire. If you want, I could dress up in a diaper and pacifier, make it more humiliating for me...

Faith: Such a comedian.

Terral: You think so? Other people don't, really. Although - 8 out of 10 hostages I have would say once you get under that evil thing I’m a real nice guy.

Faith: Just so you know, those were your last words.

Terral: Whatever, babe...

(Terral grabs Faith by the throat, and pushes her away. She goes flying into a wall, knocking her unconscious.)

Terral: I told you I don't like killing pretty people...

Fade out

Fade in.

(Raven is standing in a clearing, with her vamp lackey.)


Raven: I wish those jerks would hurry up, I hate waiting around. Amy said they'd be here soon after I got here...

Vamp 4: Maybe the Slayer got to them?

Raven: I don't think so... we've got that whole diversion thing, remember? Anyway, we should.....wait, do you hear that?

Vamp 4: Hear what? Oh, you mean the...

(Before he can finish, an arrow comes flying through the clearing, and stakes the vamp. He turns to dust, revealing the Four Horsemen in the distance, behind him, one of them lowering a crossbow. Raven just smiles.)

Raven: I love me a good entrance.

Fade out.

Fade in.

(Terral is entering his new home, carrying the limp body of the Faith over his shoulder. As he drops her to the ground, he grabs some chains from the wall next to Dawn, and chains Faith up. Terral then goes over to a bag he brought with him, and offers it to Dawn.)

Terral: So you want anything? I've got burgers, pizzas, chocolate... you know, I tend to stay away from fast food joints, but this one had class. Oh, and lots of frightened staff willing to give me anything.

Dawn: *unconcerned about food* What did you do to her?

Terral: Well, I didn't wanna fight, but she pushed me... She wasn't all that hard to get, really. You sure you wanna learn fighting skills off of her? Or that the other one will be coming to get you?

Dawn: Even more so now you've kidnapped Faith. She isn't going to be happy when she wakes up.

Terral: *If*. I don't know how hard she hit the wall....

Dawn just looks at Faith's body, willing her to wake up.

Cut to: Summers House.

(Buffy, Giles, Spike, Xander and Willow sit around in the living room, books a-plenty. Andrew is sleeping in the corner of a sofa.)


Buffy: Faith should be back by now.

Willow: She'll be back, it'll be ok, Buffy.

Spike: I could go and make a sweep?

Giles: Faith will be alright. She can handle herself.

(More silence, as the gang pretend to read. Xander gets up.)

Xander: Anyone want a drink?

(The gang all shake their heads. Xander leaves the room. A minute later, they all hear the front door slam shut.)

Buffy: Guess Faith was right - Xander isn't really that smart. Giles, I'm going after him.

(Buffy gets up, and leaves.)

Cut To: The Clearing

(Raven is standing in the clearing. The Horsemen are approaching her.)

Raven: So....Amy said to be here, with the magickal stuff. Gotta tell you, its not all that different to a drug trade...

James: We wouldn't know.

Raven: Of course not. Now, if we could just get to it, I've been waiting for a while...

(The Horsemen start to spread out, circling around Raven.)

Raven: ...what are you doing?

James: You wanted us to get started....we are.

(The Horsemen close in on Raven, just as we fade out.)

Fade in: Terral's Hideout.

(Faith & Dawn are still chained to the wall.)

Terral: I wish she'd wake up already, I hope I didn't kill her.

(He gets up, walks over to Faith, and kicks her. She coughs, and begins to come around.)

Dawn: Oh thank God, Faith...

Terral: Glad you're back with us. Now we can get to the fun.

Faith: What...

Dawn: Faith, you're with me. This Terral, he's got you too.

Faith: This is going to go down *so* well with B..

Terral: So, I was thinking - howz about we play a game?

Faith: Does it involve your death?

Terral: Its not that kind of game. Not even a game, really. Its a simple round of questions and answers. I ask, you give - and if I'm feeling generous, you can ask one too.

Faith: Fine, whatever.

Terral: Glad you agree. Now, who brought back Raven?

Faith: Brought back?

Dawn: She was killed by a Slayer once, Faith.

Faith: Really? Interesting developement... Jeeves'll be pleased...

Terral: Well, I can see you two aren't going to be *any* help...

Dawn: Maybe you could help us. You said you don't like her - why don't you help us kill her?

Terral: Because I'm lazy. But you guys should have fun trying.

Cut To: Streets of Sunnydale.

(Xander is walking down the streets. Suddenly, his face lights up.)

Xander: The factory. Of course.

(He scurries off down a side-road, into the darkness.)

Fade out

(Fade in - Terral's Hideout.)

(Terral looks at his watch then sighs.)

Terral: Oh, would you look at that! Its just about that time.... my work here is done. It's been nice chatting to you two, but I should really be getting on now.... good luck killing that bitch.

(Terral gets up and walks towards the exit. He stops at an axe, encased in one of those "in case of emergency" cases. He smashes the glass with his elbow, pulls out the axe, and lunges it at Faith, smiling. As he turns to leave, Faith moves, without flinching, slightly to the left - the axe cuts straight through her chains.)

Xander: Not so fast.

(Terral stops in his tracks.)

Terral: And who are you?

Xander: The calvary.

(Xander punches Terral. It barely registers, Terral just laughs.)

Terral: You're not even superhuman! Just....human.

Faith: He doesn't need to be anything more.

(Terral turns around, to see Faith standing right behind him, axe in hand.)

Faith: He's got me.

(She swings the axe, right through his neck. As his head falls to the ground, he turns to dust. Faith looks up at Xander.)

Faith: Nice of you to show.

Xander: Seemed like you had everything pretty much under control.

Faith: Still appreciative, Xand.

(They look at each other for a second.)

Dawn: Uh, guys? Little help here.

Cut to: The High School Basement.

(It's dark, but we can hear footsteps approaching. A sound is heard, that dull thud of a body hitting the floor. A match is lit, and the darkness is slightly illuminated. We see Raven, lying unconscious on the floor of the basement. )

Black Out.


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