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Date Posted: 21:06:00 03/02/04 Tue
Author: Jim Haney
Subject: Re: Lyric writing contest
In reply to: Scott Plumbtree 's message, "Re: Lyric writing contest" on 07:52:32 08/20/02 Tue

HEY SCOTT
Here is a set of Lyrics I would like an honest opinion on
Ihave tried before,and would like to try again.
Epitath
1.I can't imagine what was toing through your mind
The night you left on your ownnot saying a word
We would have listened,like before,don't you trust us
Always here for youI only hope that you will hear this

2. Hearts were broken,tears were shed,were they all in vain?
Can't you still hear those who loved you?,we're not acceppting
Facts that do not add up,nothing adds up,my friend
I can't accept what I saw, my respectfor you has'nt changed

3,I raeliz there were problems but I've always listend
If it's all an act,don't be afraid,we'll understand
My heart and ears are opento hear you,speak up,my friend
Dont turn your back on meI haven't turned mine on you

Chorus:
Open your heart and soul,say what's on your mind
I know there's a lot on your mind please don't hold back
Open hearts and arms are waiting for you

4. It's time to come out of hiding my friend,i'm waiting
To many peol\plewant to forgive you,we miss your friendship
It's time to heal broken hearts and start over again
Time to speak up and tell all ,I'm ready to listen

5.To many tears have been shed,a lot of feelings called
You know you've been seen bymaney of your friends
Don't denyme,we know you'vebeenaroundand watching
No more lying It's time to shoh your face please come home

Jim Haney

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