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Date Posted: 15:37:50 02/07/03 Fri
Author: PuNkY@DeMoN»
Subject: Re: I´LL APPRECIATE IT A LOT IF YOU CRITICIZE MY STUFF!!!!!
In reply to: HECTOR GIL 's message, "I´LL APPRECIATE IT A LOT IF YOU CRITICIZE MY STUFF!!!!!" on 15:56:46 01/24/03 Fri

>thank you FIRST OF ALL, WELL THIS MY LITTLE WORK, AS
>ÍM STARTING IN THE BUSSINESS IT MAY HAVE LOTS OF
>MISTAKES AND ENGLISH BAD SPELLING TOO. I´M SORRY ABOUT
>IT, THEY´RE INTROS MOSTLY, 4 IN TOTAL....ITS A KIND OF
>ALTERNATIVE MUSIC EXCEPT FOR #3 WICH IS HAPPY PUNK.
>
>
>
>1: BACK TO 1885:
>LYRICS:
>
>BACK TO 1885
>EVERYONE KISSED LADIES HANDS
>THEY DID NOT FLY THROUGH THE SKY
>BUT THEY COULD DIE FOR A PAL
>BACK TO 1885
>NEVER THOUGHT OF TERRORISM
>THEY WERE POORER THAN WE ARE
>THEN YOU MAY BE WANT TO THINK x2
>
>Chorus:
>IS IT WORHT IT
>TO FIGHT WITH YOU
>IS OT WORTH IT
>TO KILL FOR YOU
>BLOW OFF YOUR SHIT AND RETURN BACK TO REAL
>LIKE IN 1885
>-------------------------------------------------------
>-----
>
>7 THAT’S WHY I´M PRAYING
>
>ITS SOMETIMES HARD TO WALK
>AND LEAVE THE PAST BEHIND
>A HARD DESEASE CAN MAKE YOU STRONG
>BUT IT WILL SURELY CHANGE YOUR MIND
>
>I SEE THEM TALK AND TALK
>LIKE EVERYTHING´S ALRIGHT
>BUT THEY JUST CARE ABOUT THEMSELVES
>IT SEEMS TO BE A BAD SIGN
>
>CHORUS:
>
>THAT´S WHY I´M PRAYING
>TO PROTECT THIS PLACE
>NOT TO SEE DISGRACE
>
>AND JUST STOP THINKING
>LET THE MINDS AWAY
>COME TO SAVE THIS PLACE
>JUST LIKE I DO
>-------------------------------------------------------
>-----
>ANOTHER HIT
>
>AS SHE GOES BY THE WAY
>EVERTHING SEEMS SO SIMPLE
>SHE´S ALL FOR ME I´VE TO SAY
>IT´S THE ONE I ALWAYS THINK ON
>
>WHAT A BABE MY HEART SAYS
>JUST WISH I COULD BE HANDSOME
>MY PALS MAKE JOKES WITH IT
>THEY THINK I´M JUST AN ASSHOLD
>-------------------------------------------------------
>-----
>
>WHEN THE YOUNG TURNS OLD
>
>VERSE1
>
>THE LEAVES HAVE GROWN THE TREES ARE GREEN
>BUT TREES STILL LOOK SO LONELY AND SICK
>I WONDER WHY THEY RAISED THE LEAVES
>IF THEY ARE GONE AFTER THE SUMMER LEAVES
>
>CHORUS
>
>AHˇ AHˇ
>WHEN THE YOUNG TURNS OLD
>LIFE´S NOT THE SAME AT ALL (X2)
>
>VERSE 2
>
>JUST NEXT THE TREE THERE WAS A KID
>BECAME A MAN AND MET HIS DREAM
>HE MARRIED HER AND HAD THEIR KID
>TOO BAD THEY DIDN´T SAW THE TREE
>
>CHORUS (X1)
>
>VERSE 3
>
>AND KNOW THAT KID TURNED INTO A TEEN
>SMOKES SOME WEED AND HANGS OUT WITH THIEVES
>HIS PARENTS WISHED THEY´D NEVER SPLIT
>THE KID IS LOST... JUST AS THE LEAVES
>
>CHORUS (X2)
>
> THANKS A LOT,PLEASE CRITICIZE IT AS YOUR OPINION IS
>VERY IMPORTANT FOR ME...HOPE TO HELP YOU SOMEDAY
>"BEST FRIENDS EVER MAKE BEST BANDS EVER"
>HECTOR GIL (MY NAME)
>
>CHERESKEAN@HOTMAIL.COM
great job,good plots, maybe the third is too typical 4 happy punk. but they´re sticky...
keep your hand workingˇˇˇ

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