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Date Posted: 13:50:02 01/03/04 Sat
Author: Rob
Subject: can i have some advice on this song?

I just wrote a song about my girl...and i usually write hard rock and stuff but i can tell this would sound a lot better soft...i would appreciate if you gave me some advice...here it is...

About Me-

You know she cries her heart out
When she knows you're not around
But you know that you can't stop her
Until she lets it out

I don't know nothin' 'bout her
'cept she hates it when she's wrong
I may say someday
But that may be too long

I know that she's wrong
I know that she's wrong
About me

You know i'd do anything for you
I feel all my love towards you
I'd stand by your door in the rain
What is this feelin', I've been recievin'
Its just enough to drive me insane

I know that she's wrong
I know that she's wrong
About me,
I know that she's wrong
I know that she's wrong
About Me, About Me

I wanna reach out and touch you
do you feel this too?
If you do, I won't turn away
I wanna make your life better
When i'm gone i'll write you letters
With a pretty little stamp above your name

I know that she's wrong
I know that she's wrong
About me

I know that she's wrong
I know that she's wrong
About me

thats it...please help!

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