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Date Posted: 12:10:40 02/07/02 Thu
Author: Scott Plumbtree
Subject: Re: song lyrics
In reply to: martin 's message, "Re: song lyrics" on 11:23:49 02/06/02 Wed

Hey Martin,

Thanks for posting your songs. I think I may need to take some more time seeing that 3 songs were posted. For future reference I think you'll get more detailed responses if you only post one at a time. Just to let you know, I nearly shot coffee out at my computer screen here at work after I read Riding Girl with the line that has GUY in all caps. I got a kick out of it. I'll try to critique these as soon as I possibly can.

Scott

>
>
>Hi Scott, thanks for your reply,
>Here are some of my attempts,
>Let me know what you think,
>Martin
>
>RIDING GIRL
>
>open it up
>bring it down
>don`t hang on
>don`t sleep
>don't speak
>ride it up
>ride it down
>
>she`s smiling
>while she`s
>riding that car (chorus)
>riding that horse
>riding that ...
>GUY
>
>smile, oh` smile
>smile for me
>change your face
>talk, talk to me
>moan, moan
>scream, scream
>smile ride smile
>
>ridin` in the scent
>of skin, of skin
>the scent he is
>in, in
>sin, sin, sin
>riding sin
>skin skin skin
>
>ride
>ride ride ride
>
>RIDE
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>MINISTER OF LOVE
>
>dancing in her eyes
>asking for names
>asking for numbers
>gently
>taking the ladies
>touched by him
>
>a change in her face
>he changes her face
>she forgets her name (chorus)
>she takes off her face for
>a minister of love
>
>he gives her a hand
>helps her up
>so high up
>so fast
>so much love
>touched by them hands
>
>don`t tell her
>he`s here
>she wouldn`t
>let him go
>`cause she knows
>she will be
>touched by him
>
>obsession for sale
>she knows
>he gives her
>what he has
>what she wants
>touched by them hands.
>
>
>SMOKING BLUES
>
>one day
>as I went for cigarettes
>at the corner shop
>I`ve seen
>
>a young girl sitting
>on her front door steps
>in the sun reading
>reading, reading, reading
>
>one day
>as I went for cigarettes
>at the corner shop
>I`ve seen
>
>a man carrying
>two buckets full of sand
>he`s stealing them from
>the building site round the corner,
>stealing, stealing, stealing
>
>one day
>as I went for cigarettes
>at the corner shop
>I`ve seen
>
>a woman driving by
>and asking for the way
>but she didn`t understand what I said
>so she`s still driving,
>driving, driving, driving
>
>and as I went back to my house
>with my cigarettes
>I`ve seen
>
>a man walking in front of me
>and he was smoking,
>smoking, smoking, smoking
>smoking blues
>
>one day I just went for cigarettes
>at the corner shop
>and I came back,
>I came back with a song
>smoking blues
>smoking blues.
>
>
>
>Further details: www.lyricforasong.de

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