Thanks for the additional information on your story. It all sounds very interesting!
Actually you got it across that Heather and Fallon are communicating. Somehow I just thought it was a mixture of Thoughts that can be read by Fallon and thoughts just for herself. Maybe I'm lacking concentration. I usually get to the computer late in the evening when my brains are used up by quelling the warfare of my two sons... ;o) - BTW the fever of my 2 year old finally broke and I hope we will be back to "normal" tomorrow...