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Date Posted: 10:16:24 06/16/10 Wed
Author: susiej
Subject: Debi>>>
In reply to: Debi 's message, "I need to be more Zen between dialogue, you're saying..;-)" on 06:18:50 06/16/10 Wed

I used to be the absolute worst ever at describing every emotion. One of the many reasons my word count was so big.

Now, I think it's became, for me, like Ester and her adverbs. No offense Ester! Because I agree; however, the occasional adverb or emotional description can add zing or depth. Like that chuckle- chuckle usually means amused, but amusement may not come from what the reader thinks. In your case it was- oh, if you only knew how I'm about to bite your head off.

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>I used to be the absolute worst ever at describing >every emotion. One of the many reasons my word count >was so big. > >Now, I think it's became, for me, like Ester and her >adverbs. No offense Ester! Because I agree; however, >the occasional adverb or emotional description can add >zing or depth. Like that chuckle- chuckle usually >means amused, but amusement may not come from what the >reader thinks. In your case it was- oh, if you only >knew how I'm about to bite your head off.
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