Date Posted:18:52:14 08/08/10 Sun Author:debikm Subject: Lovely... In reply to:
Fi
's message, "Love in a rainy climate >>>>" on 15:27:54 08/08/10 Sun
You have a very lyrical way with phrasing that makes me a bit jealous. I love how you weave the sense into the story, sometimes with unexpected results. I'm (im)patiently waiting for more of this story to come along.
There's just something about a man defending a lady's honour that gets to me. Never mind that I'm wondering what the repercussions are going to be, besides what I think they will be, based on what little I know of this story. *G*
But yeah, a very easily pictured scene you captured beautifully.