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Date Posted: 03:33:31 04/18/11 Mon
Author: Esther
Subject: I'll just answer for the both here >>>
In reply to: Debi 's message, "And the rewrite on my class story..." on 13:09:56 04/04/11 Mon

First, I like this version. It flows well from start to finish, and the finish leaves me, as the reader, with a sense that although they have a lot to work out and have to deal with their grief, at least they have the knowledge that the other will be there for them in their own way.

Second,the blurb. There's enough there to sharpen my interest, with the thoughts of the possible interference, and of course I'm a sucker for any thing even remotely relating to the chance of a hard won fight for a happy ending. And that's the feeling I get.

Excellent.

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