Hmmmm, why is it that if I have something homework fitting in my poetry stack it is allways something I allready posted ;) -- Ladies of Lallybroch Literary Forum

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Date Posted: 07:56:39 04/18/11 Mon
Author: Lady Morilka
Subject: Hmmmm, why is it that if I have something homework fitting in my poetry stack it is allways something I allready posted ;)
In reply to: Esther 's message, "HOMEWORK for 11-04-2011" on 13:35:18 04/11/11 Mon

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[> [> Well, I wouldn't complain if you posted it again, because I do enjoy your poetry. And you know, there might be some that haven't read it before. So I say post away! -- Esther, 12:06:47 04/21/11 Thu

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[> [> Ok, here I go. .oO( Good thing there is no minimum word count) -- Lady Morilka, 03:38:18 04/24/11 Sun

copyright 2005 by me, all rights reserved. Posted for sharing and critique
purposes only, does not constitute publication.

Under water
no one sees me cry.
All is peacefull,
and I am free.

Until the next breath.

Although this one was originally in german, I have to admit, the more times I read it the better I like it in englisch. It simply flowes better.

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[> [> [> Hey! This is familiar! And I agree it flows very well. And the fact that it is so short only makes the message that much more clear. Thanks for posting again! -- Esther, 14:41:27 04/29/11 Fri

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