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Date Posted: 10:41:07 07/16/12 Mon
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Myxtress
Subject: Welcome Back!! Hope you pop in more often! And, of course, throw things out here! *G* This way please >>>
In reply to: JustGina 's message, "I haven't been here in YEARS, but I popped on and #3 tied in with a little something I threw together a few days ago. It's a little odd, but I thought it would be fun to throw out there>>>" on 17:10:53 07/13/12 Fri

>I don't have a title, but it is for the writing prompt
>"Communication" Was I supposed to actually USE the
>word communication in the piece? Well. Enjoy!

LOL Nope! You did awesome! The one word prompt is open to however you want to use it. And let me say, how much I enjoyed coming here with my morning cup of coffee, and reading this bit you posted. Wonderful!

And not odd at all! This is a cool concept! Love it!

From the first skreeck of warped wood, to the stockinged foot in a not-quite-sensible shoe, you had me. And then you go and show me the setting so vividly, cinching the whole deal with this:

This space had been empty for some time, and it was as if the room couldn't quite figure out how to make space for the intruder.

I really felt the abondonment here.

And now, for some reason, I almost feel like going and cleaning up my email. *G* Almost...

Thanks so much for sharing! More. Soon. K??

Hugs

Esther
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[> [> [> Thanks, Esther! And it is nice to meet you! :) I'll try to show up more often! --

JustGina, 13:36:32 07/16/12 Mon

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