Date Posted:13:05:50 02/11/10 Thu Author: Debi Subject: I think susiej hit the high points In reply to:
LRLassie
's message, "Re: Thanks for the feedback" on 12:22:07 02/11/10 Thu
I liked the legend that you wove in the story. Sounds just like something that would be spawned from a Louisiana swamp! The characterizations are good, great idea making Marcia such a germaphobe and having to chase a story in the swamp. I have to admit, I was half-hoping for her to get pulled into the swampwater and forced to face her phobia as directly as possible! ;-) But I'm just mean ike that...
Yes there were a lot of grammatical errors and I personally would like more dialogue, but you made some very solid, believable characters. And made me start to like Marcia by the end. That's hard to do, make an unlikeable character someone to root for, especially in short a piece. Great work!
