Date Posted:18:09:04 05/14/10 Fri Author: Debi Subject: I appreciate the comments Fi! In reply to:
Fi
's message, "birthdays, dwarves and buffalo" on 04:28:52 05/12/10 Wed
Excellent ideas for tightening the prose(ac;-) I'll work those in as I tweak.
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>>“Bison, or Cape buffalo?”
>:D That's just like something my husband would say
>(we're Discovery Channel addicts).
Us too!
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>You really know how to use dialogue to build
>characters. More Valerie & family, please!
Thank you!!! I'm so glad you think I do iot well. I sometimes wonder...
More coming! I have rewrites on Old Dogs so I may start posting what I add and change here for my check-in/crit/look at me! posts on Saturdays.
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>Fi
