Date Posted:09:09:18 01/29/10 Fri Author: Esther Subject: That last line summarizes so well the feel of this piece. Well done! In reply to:
LRLassie
's message, "Re: Class is back in session ;-)" on 16:53:10 01/28/10 Thu
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Very nice! -- Debi, 20:11:53 01/29/10 Fri
I like the tone. It starts out like a dedicated person, working through lunches, really focused on what they do. It degenerates into almost desperation and resignation. The prompt line seems very sad in context with the rest. Excellent!