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Date Posted: 09:09:18 01/29/10 Fri
Author: Esther
Subject: That last line summarizes so well the feel of this piece. Well done!
In reply to: LRLassie 's message, "Re: Class is back in session ;-)" on 16:53:10 01/28/10 Thu


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[> [> [> Very nice! -- Debi, 20:11:53 01/29/10 Fri

I like the tone. It starts out like a dedicated person, working through lunches, really focused on what they do. It degenerates into almost desperation and resignation. The prompt line seems very sad in context with the rest. Excellent!

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