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Date Posted: 23:12:28 11/13/09 Fri
Author: Page
Subject: Oh, goody! A new story to love! >>>>
In reply to: dea 's message, "come inside" on 12:48:19 11/10/09 Tue

That first sentence is brilliant! I love it!

It did take me a bit to get into the way Victor writes/speaks, although you nailed the period language perfectly. But once my mind caught up to it, I had no problems at all. The story is captivating right from the start, and I was sucked right into it. What a great start!

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