Date Posted:23:12:28 11/13/09 Fri Author:Page Subject: Oh, goody! A new story to love! >>>> In reply to:
dea
's message, "come inside" on 12:48:19 11/10/09 Tue
That first sentence is brilliant! I love it!
It did take me a bit to get into the way Victor writes/speaks, although you nailed the period language perfectly. But once my mind caught up to it, I had no problems at all. The story is captivating right from the start, and I was sucked right into it. What a great start!