Date Posted:22:16:48 12/09/09 Wed Author:Fel Subject: Hi Page!! In reply to:
Page
's message, "This way, Fel >>>>>" on 18:03:57 12/09/09 Wed
Ok. I don't hate you, Page *g*. Yes, Heinrich is my main character. Now, my two beta readers so far, have liked my first chapter the way it is, the fact that they are related to me may have something to do with it! *g*
Asking readers to feel something for a Nazi officer is a long shot in itself, but, he does completely redeem himself in the end. I will play around with some possibilities in my head first and see if I can find a better way to start the novel off.
As for the type of crit I would like to get, a hard crit at this point would be very usefull. Middle of the road and general impressions are also very appreciated.
