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Date Posted: 21:30:45 10/28/09 Wed
Author: Page
Subject: Ah, you do know me well >>>>
In reply to: Esther 's message, "K, you posted this a week ago, and so, I’m positive that it isn’t like this anymore…but follow me anyway, cause I just have to reply >>>" on 14:15:34 10/27/09 Tue

You're spot on -- this has not only been changed, it's been relegated to the Discard file.

You're right, it was an info dump, and dumped there by a secondary character who isn't very likeable. And, upon further reflection, I wondered why the hell this was important anyway. *G*

So it's gone. The fact that Jay wanted Adam to be part of Wonderkind is already elsewhere in the story, so having it here was just needless repetition.

And now on to your two brilliant examples. Both were riveting, especially because Lone Wolf's feelings were so dominant in both. In the first, you truly brought in a mystery, the white woman. In the second, Lone Wolf sought the answers she told him to seek. Loved them both, and I thank you for posting them. It's helped a ton!

Hugs,
Page

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