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Date Posted: 10:32:26 07/02/03 Wed
Author: Talno Moonwhisp
Subject: You'll see
In reply to: guess who 's message, "cool, but what's with the title??" on 10:02:44 07/02/03 Wed

>> As Reevils mind cleared, and his eyes did not seem so
>>hard to open, he snapped awake. His surroundings were
>>cloudy and dark. Only a dim candle was at his side
>>flickering almost burnt down to the bottom. He seemed
>>to be in some sort of bed. It was fluffy and soft.
>>
>>Suddenly, light flooded on to his face. A door opened
>>in front of him. There sttod a homely looking mouse.
>>She wore a floral apron and had a pair of garden
>>clippers in her hand. " Oh! Your awake dear! Do you
>>feel better know?"
>>
>>Reevil shrugged and looked at the small room around
>>him. It was like a cabin. It had no windows, but was
>>filled with miscelanious things. Fishing nets, kegs of
>>ale, bottles of wine, paints, and much more were in
>>there.
>>
>>" Oh, I'm sorry dear, if the room isn't to bright and
>>cheerful. Or is it to crowded and clustered? Hmmm...
>>Grump was supposed to clean the guest bedroom last
>>week. Uh... I'm the only one working around here but
>>me. Oh and how rude of me! My name is Livian
>>Tigerlilie"
>>
>>Reevil groggily nodded and wiped the sleep out of his
>>eyes." Follow me dear. I've got a hot breakfast set in
>>the kitchen for you". Reevil silently obeyed and
>>yawned. He followed her through many dirt tunnels.
>>Every once and a while there would be a lantern
>>hanging down from a root jutting into the tunnel
>>ceiling.
>>
>>Finnally they opened up a door and went in what
>>appeared to be a kitchen. It was covered in wooden
>>tables, cupboards on the walls and a giant stove
>>placed between a stone counter under the cupboards.
>>
>>Livian found Reevil gaping at the stove and said " I
>>need a big stove to cook for a lot of people" She said
>>as she gestured towards the manybeasts sitting at the
>>wooden table." And thats not even all of them!" She
>>exclaimed washing her hands in a bucket of water.
>>
>>A loud and boisterous hare sat at the table and called
>>out." So otter, whats your name eh?" Reevil didn't
>>know that the hare was directing to him, for he didn't
>>know he was a otter. Livian turned Reevil around with
>>one hand, and a potatoe in the other." Well, come on
>>now, don't be shy".
>>
>>But I'm not shy! I can't talk!!! Screamed Reevil in
>>his mind, trying to push the words through his
>>stubborn mouth.
>>
>>But it was to late. All eyes were set upon Reevil. The
>>table was filled with many sorts of beasts. Some
>>Reevil knew, such as hedgehogs, hares, and mice, but
>>not all the others. The hush was broken by that same
>>hare." Well?" The hare tapped his fingers on the
>table.
>>
>>Reevil tried to talk, but the words turned into a
>>choking sound." Oh dear, Livian. I think he has a sore
>>throat!" Said an odd animal with autumn brown fur and
>>a large bushy tail.
>>
>>Livian frowned. "I checked his throat last night! It
>>was perfectly fine and normal"-"but maybe he got
>>another one!" Cried a large fat mouse in the very back
>>sitting on a huge armchair." Oh Dirship! You wouldn't
>>know the difference between a cheery pie and a sore
>>throat!"-"I would to!" The one on the armchair named
>>Dirship croaked back." Ya' know back in my day, I used
>>to be the captain medic of the Midnight Cruiser, a
>>beautiful warship. Healed many a' beast...." Every one
>>groaned and mumbled." Not another one of his long
>>stories!"
>>
>>Livian rolled her eyes and turned back to Reevil."
>>Nevermind him. Anyway... Do you have a sore throat?"
>>Reevil sighed and put two fingers between his tounge.
>>To signal that he couldn't talk.
>>
>>A curious babble broke out in the tables and several
>>shouts came out." He wants some scissors to cut his
>>tounge with!" Yelled the boisterous hare followed by a
>>few stifled giggles." Donovander Melander!" Yelled
>>Livian in one of those stern dissapointed mother
>>tones. The hare looked down hiding a smile on his
>>face." Sorry Livian..." He said in a fake sorry tone.
>>
>>She frowned once more and then whirled around back to
>>Reevil." Can you even talk???" she sighed. Reevil
>>shook his head vigorously. She turned to everyone." He
>>can't talk!" There was a silence followed by a gasp.
>>Reevil frowned and rolled his eyes." Treat the
>>poorbeast with respect!" Yelled Livian with her paws
>>on her hips." We all owe a big apolloge to him. Err...
>>What's your name?"-" HE CAN"T TALK REMEMBER?!?!" Cried
>>out all the beasts sitting at the table." Oh yes..."
>>
>>" Lets see if he can write it!" Yelled a small runty
>>mouse." Ah! Reblem! Good thinking! Who has a peice of
>>parchment and a quill?" Livian asked."I have my
>>history book! We can write on that" Said a odd animal
>>that looked slightly like a mouse." No Yukk! You need
>>that for your studies with Dirship!" Livian retorted.
>>The odd mouse named Yukk sneered." Dirship[ falls
>>asleep through most of the class anyway..."
>>
>>"ahah!" Yelled a hedgehog jumping up from his seat." I
>>have a crumpled up peice of scrap paper!" He said as
>>he jogged down the aisle and handed it to Livian."
>>Thank you Heeder!" She tried to pat him on the back,
>>but retracted her hand with a yelp." Ouch! Spikes!"
>>
>>"Now all we need is a quill and ink..." Livian
>>pondered."Oh yes! Teeter wou..." - "hurr, hi
>>everyonez! Oi just gots finished with da' hundred and
>>thirtenthz cahapter! So, wheres the grub eh'? I'm
>>starvin'" interupted a ink stained mole with a odd
>>accent. It was unusual. The speech seemed to have a
>>bit of regular talk in it." Whatz you all ztaring at?"
>>Teeter asked taking a step backwards from the stares
>>of hungry eyes. In one hand he held a quill.
>>
>>"Ah! Me smock!" Teeter yelled shivering in the far
>>corner of the room being held by Donovander." Your
>>smock'll be ok Teeter!" Comforted Donovander in a
>>sarcastic voice. Teeter shivered some more and
>>whimpered. On the table beasts gathered around Teeters
>>cloak trying to get some of the ink off of his shirt
>>into the quill. Manybeasts tried to sucseed, but only
>>to have it snatched away by someone else. Dirship
>>waddled over on his knarled walking stick." Move and
>>make room for old Dirship!" He said as he pushed his
>>way to the shirt. He hit the quill out of another baby
>>moles hand with his walkingstick. The mole shreiked
>>and ran to his mother at the end of the room." Old
>>fool..." She muttered under her breath.
>>
>>Dirship snatched the quill and ajusted his giant thick
>>glasses on his wrinkled snout." Whatch and learn!" He
>>said with a old smile. He found a good grip on the
>>quill and started gathering ink. Only one problem. He
>>was stroking the end of the quill, the feather,
>>against the table. Livian seized the quill from
>>Dirship's hand." Stupid crazybeast. Thats the wrong
>>end!"-" Well my eyes aren't as good as they use ta'
>>be..."-"Oh your eyes never were any use!" Retorted
>>Livian.
>>
>>Reevil was in the far corner sitting on the ground in
>>a fit of laughter. He closed his eyes and opened them
>>to see the comical group. How they communicated with
>>eachother was hilarious! Arguing over stupid little
>>things. He closed his eyes again in a spasm of
>>laughter. It was so funny his eyes started to water as
>>he gasped for breath.
>>
>>Dirship peered back at Reevil." Poor beast. Yew were
>>being so mean ta' me that the blighter started
>>crying!"-" No Dirship, he's been crying ever since he
>>set eyes on your horrid face!" Sneered Donovander." Oh
>>you little..." WACK! Dirship's walkingstick crushed
>>Donovander's paw into the table." Aahhh! You dirty old
>>geeser! Yew' broke me pore paw!!!"
>>
>>Finally Livian aproached Reevil." Whats wrong dear?
>>Why are you crying?" She said as she placed the paper
>>and quill in his hands. Reevil barely managed to write
>>one word through his roaring.
>>
>>Laughter
>>
>>Livian pursed her lips as she read the word." I have
>>to tell you, we have a very odd family. I'll tell you
>>more later..." She murmered with a smile. As the
>>others still bickered she continued." So whats your
>>name?" Reevil didn't know his name. Once he saw the
>>paper in front of him he remembered it. Like a peice
>>of his memory had drifted into veiw. Before him, on
>>the paper read:
>>
>>Reevil Sharpsight
>>
>>to be continued...

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