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Date Posted: 20:20:55 03/28/03 Fri
Author: Faromear
Subject: The Quest for the Triton Sword

Chapter one
The Bikelock Incident

The teacher sighed as the school bell rang loudly. The Dullsville Middle School students jumped out of their seats and sprinted out the room, all except for a girl named Jade Ignuss who slowly stood up from her school desk. At Dullsville Middle School she was considered an outcast, or "Out" as many of the students labeled her. She was "Out" of the coolest fasion fad dyeing your hair blue. This may seem very unfair to you. Because if you did'nt want to dye your hair an odd color than that would be perfectly fine. But in this Middle School it was vital for your social life. But sadly Jade had no social life to speak of. All she had were her parents. She sighed deeply as she grabbed her binder and school books and shoved in her black book bag. She lifted the strap over her arm and set out into the corridor.
"Sqeak!" went her (as the "in" part of students would say) tacky shoes as they rubbed against the hallway tiles. Suddenly she was pushed over into a locker door with a loud "Clang!" Tom Baulder the school "hottie" pushed her over with one of his black haired arms."Were ya goin in such a hurry?" He mocked."I'm going home for your information" she said in a annoyed tone."So if you would escuse me I'm in a hurry to"-"Well thats just to bad. You might have a little delay" he threatened. He tossed his blue hair out of his eyes and strode away with his two stupid freainds that agreed on every evil scheme of his. They looked like his two clones as they walked exactly like Tom. Jade picked up her books that had apparently been scattered on the ground beside her when Tom pushed her into the locker. She murmered "gosh, I wish he would just leave me alone".
She walked down the crowded sweat smelling halls to the courtyard. In the courtyard she breathed in the smell of pine trees. The courtyard held a garden with small wooden benches for doing homework. She went twards the bike rack to retreive her bike. She suddenly dropped her books in dismay as she found a green bike chain that locked her bike to the rack. This bikelock wasn't hers. A small yellow sticky note was stuck to the black squishy seat of the bike. It read plainly:

Sucker!

Jade trembeled with rage as if she were going to explode. She suddenly burst out with anger and kicked a big rock, that went flying into a window with a crashing sound of breaking glass."Oh no!" she murmered. Jade started to sprint out of the courtyard only to be stopped by the voice of her school princaple. Out of all the people that could come out of the door and yell at her, it had to be the princaple." Jade Ignuss, come here right now and tell me what you just did!" He yelled. Jade turned around stiffly as if her upper body was frozen with fright. She shuffeled over to the princaple gingerly. I don't know if you've ever been to the princaples office, but it's terrifying. Even when your not in trouble. But this was worse, confronting the princaple face to face in deep trouble, just saying that makes me tremble." Tell me what you were doing!" He snapped once more. "All of this was because of that, that Tom! He got me into all this trouble" she thought."What were you doing!" The princaple yelled for the third time, so loud that his "My Name Is Princaple Eadorf" badge shook violently." I accidently broke the window" murmered Jade shyly."Accidently? I don't think so, that was assult of school property!" He yelled using the word assult as if the window was a living thing."Come with me into my office, now!" He uttered in a dangerous ready to attack tone.
As they were walking through the deserted halls of the school, Jade was already planning how to say her excuse. She was reciting it in her head"Mr. Eadorf, I was walking out the courtyard when I found that my bike was locked and"-"We are here" Mr. Eadorf said in a voice that made Jades blood turn cold. They stepped through a polished pine door with a gold plate that said PRINCAPLE with big letters. Jade took a seat in one of the blue plastic chairs around a round table. The room was empty except for a neat and tidy desk and a expresso machine. On top of the round table there were little empty coffee cups that used to be filled with coffee. The princaple took a cup of expresso and sat in one of the chairs."Explain" said Mr. Eardorf. Jade started her excuse " Mr. Princaple Eadorf sir, ummm... I was going into the courtyard to get my bike to ride home and umm... I found a lock that wasn't mine. So I got mad because now I couldn't go home, and umm... Well I kicked the dirt and I so happened to hit a rock that hit the window"."Fibs! All Fibs! inquivication, falsehood, falsety, misrepresentaion, mendacity, and of course a lie!" He said showing off his large vocabulary"I'm calling your parents this instant!" He cried and seized the phone. He brandished it like a weapon smiling devilishly."I'm going to have a little chat with your parents!" And at that he pressed the dialing number and started dialing. He called Jade's parents so much that he memorized her phone number"Hello? Hi this is Princaple Eadorf from Dullsville Middle School home of the Ducks, and your daughter I'm very, very, very sorry to say has destroyed school property, yes, yes, yes, no, ok" Princaple Eardorf snickered and handed Jade the phone. Nervously she picked the phone out of Princaple Eadorf's large hairy hand and put it to her ear. Immideatly she heard her mother yell "Jade how could you disgrace our family like this! I am very dissapointed in you! We will have a talk after school, you me and your father!" Jade gave the phone back to princaple Eadorf, who hung up."Follow me to the bus" he said as he pushed the door open leading to the corridor. They walked down the long corridor to the parking lot where the late bus would be waiting for her. They got to the parking lot and Jade saw that nobody would be on the bus home but her. The bus driver had a black hat on and had a brown mustache matching the food stain on his shirt. He nodded to the angry princaple behind Jade and Jade could see the princeaple behind her nod out of the corner of her eye. The busdriver then said to the princeaple " Your special student or something?" in a gruff voice pointing his fat finger at Jade.
to be continued...

This is only part of a very long story that i'm writing with my freind. Although I don't have it all typed up on my computer. Its all stored away in notebooks.

Tell me what you think by emailing me

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