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Date Posted: 13:03:58 05/17/03 Sat
Author: "Ivan" Now called Laatst Stalletje
Subject: +^+The Final Farewell+^+
Name "Ivan" now called Laatst Stalletje
NName Laat
Breed Percheron
Gender Stallion
Age 5
Color Bay
^The once eager colt enters the terra, he had called home so long ago, his dull buckskin foal coat was gone and he was left with a dappled bay coat, his hooves now three times the size they had been and his once nappy mane and tail had gone leaving him with a luxurious mane and tail. He shakes his dial as the long locks toss from one side to the other, he lets out a short muffled nicker as he scans the terra for the lead^
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 18:16:42 05/18/03 Sun [1]
^He snorts and strikes the earth with daggers o' Steel, he lowers his head and grazes as he waits^
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i love your picture! sorry, just had to compliment it. ;) -- player, 19:15:55 05/18/03 Sun [1]
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THX -- PLayer, 06:38:55 05/21/03 Wed [1]
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*She slowly walked over. She couldn't believe it.>>> -- Basandara, 14:31:44 05/22/03 Thu [1]
Here, standing in front of her was.....Ivan. She shakes her head slightly, to see it this is true. It is. This is the same colt who threatened to jump a cliff if she wouldn't be his mate instead of just being really-good-friends-might-be-more with him and the other colt a while ago. But she had never answered. Without anyone to play with it had become boring. So she started to play more with the little'uns, talk more to the grown-ups, and invite those that came. But now that he was back.....she didn't know how to act around him, or how he'd act around her. She did not forget before. Softly she speaks.* Hello Iva...Latt.*The gentle breeze blows her mane gently, the sun glinting off her reddish coat. Her gentle blue eyes calmly look onward, wondering how he'd reply.*
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 17:46:39 05/22/03 Thu [1]
+He turns slightly to greet the approaching mare, he was about to speak, but he stopped he watched her and shook his head+ Basandara? +he watches her+
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*Her eyes soft, she nods softly.* yes. *A small crystal tear rolls down the finely sculptured fillie's face.>>> -- Basandara, 14:04:08 05/23/03 Fri [1]
Oh, how much she had missed him. After the threat to jump he had gone inactive, and it broke her little heart dearly. Often she had wondered if he'd come back, to see him on the hill in the sunlight, then him galloping down and start a game. How it was good in those days, when jelously was an unknown evil. She shakes her head softly, trying to get away the tears, now constantly flowing. Though she had missed him dearly, it is not so easy to win a heart a second time after a sincere heart has been broken, threats to end a loved one's life are heard, and the loved one slowly fades into life's beautiful background. But these things can slowly heal.*
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 17:01:14 05/23/03 Fri [1]
+He smiles widely, he pranced happily+ A.. O... Wow! How are you? I mean... E...H... Wow! +He smiled as he watched her, he had almost forgotten about the innsodent so long ago but now his stubborness back then made him feel so foolish+
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*She smiles softly through her tears* I'm o.k....but still a little hurt.>>> -- Basandara, 11:28:22 05/27/03 Tue [1]
*She walks up to him, a little cautious, in case he should try to hurt her again. But secretly she hoped it wouldn't end up like that again. Standing in front of him, she wonders what he'll do. Will he apologize, will he brush it off, will he want to be like before, how close they were? She wonders in her mind. For she surley won't budge. If he wanted her, he'd need to work harder to earn this heart back. But she was willing.*
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 16:29:51 05/27/03 Tue [1]
+He lowers his head+ I'm sorry... about what happened before +He looks at her, his head still lower than hers+ But I was not even a year! Death never really occured to be forever. +He shakes his head+ I know that is not an excuse but, I didnt know what else to do... +his ears perk as he catches a familiar sound, yet he knew nothing of it+
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*She smiles softly. She then puts down her head and lifts up his.* It's o.k.>>> -- Basandara, 15:40:39 05/30/03 Fri [1]
*She smiles and hugs him and rubs their necks. In that touching sentence he said, and in those two words she said, everything had been forgiven and forgotten. All she knew was that her heart was his again if it kept going the way it was.*
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 19:23:09 05/30/03 Fri [1]
+He rubed her back and then drew back, his feelings for her had changed, he'd changed, he looked at her, could things really go back to the way that had once been? Could he learn to love once more? So much had happened to him after he left Basandara all those years ago+
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*She moves back slowly. She knew she shouldn't have been so quick to forgive. Now he was having doubts!* -- Basandara, 20:34:20 05/30/03 Fri [1]
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 21:35:53 05/30/03 Fri [1]
+He watches her carefully+ Basandara, I...+Pause+ I still have feelings for you... But, I dont think I can get into another relationship right now.. +Tears begin to form as he remembers his beloved Moon Hope+ I'm sorry +He turns away from her to keep her from seeing his tears, now flowing freely+
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*Looks at him, not knowing what she felt. Sadness for him, anger because there had been another,>>> -- Basandara, 04:56:29 05/31/03 Sat [1]
and disbelief of what he had just said. Confused, she asks.* Who is Moon Hope?*Cautiously she says this.*
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*Looks at him, not knowing what she felt. Sadness for him, anger because there had been another,>>> -- Basandara, 04:56:50 05/31/03 Sat [1]
and disbelief of what he had just said. Confused, she asks.* Who is Moon Hope?*Cautiously she says this.*
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 08:39:30 05/31/03 Sat [1]
((Uhhh he didnt say anything about Moon Hope... he was just thinging about her))
+He shakes his head, why did he come back? He still loved Basandara but his recent loss had him ready to run away, but he couldnt, he cared too much about Basandara to leave her again. He looked at her, the filly he had longed to be with forever was now grown into a beautiful mare, and he, the jealious colt that had wanted to die if she talked to another colt, had grown into a massive confused stallion that didnt know what to do. He sighs and looks to the sky searching for the moon, yet it was day no moon was in sight, he looks back to Basandara tears flowing down his muzzle making a small pool on the sandy ground below.+ We are so different you and I +he finally managed to mutter+ You are granddaughter to the Queen, You've always had a family to go to, and you've got the looks to win over any stallion +pause, he looks away from her+ And I, I have nothing, no mother, no father, NOTHING +He says as if he hated the word+ I've gone through so many things sence I left +he looks at her+ Its been four years! I cant imagine that you expect me to be the same colt I was before. +He watches her carefully, wondering if he had gone to far+
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*Shakes head.* I can't help who I was born to. I wouldn't care the slightest>>> -- Basandara, 06:04:24 06/01/03 Sun [1]
if I was a princess myself or just a normal "Other mares" daughter. To me, their family, not "the queen", "the princess". I'm glad I have a loving and caring family. And I'm very sorry you don't. I cannot help that. Time and destiny have taken them away from you. No one can change it.*Sighs softly, the slight breeze blowing her mane gently.* As for my looks, people are not supposed to go by looks and I have not heard of one stallion going with a mare because of looks. It always seems to be for position now.*Drops head softly.* I do not expect you to be like before. But there is one thing I wish you could do.*Looks up, a single crystal tear rolling down her cheek.* I wish you could be more stable.*She drops her head again, wondering what he'd say.*(occ-Sorry 'bout that! I was tired. But anyway, who is Moon Hope?)
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+^+The Final Farewell+^+ -- Laat, 08:53:35 06/01/03 Sun [1]
+He frowns and looks at her, slightly angered now+ I didnt come back her to find a mate or rekindle a lost love. I am on a journey of wisdom and self-knowledge. +He stands upright, his pelt shining in the sun, he looks on toward the terra borders+ I'm sorry Basandara, I cant stay here, I fear that doing so I will loose myself. Good-bye, perhaps I might return someday. +He turns, and with the flick of his tail he was gone, galloping with the wind, to continue his journey of self-knowledge+
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*Huffily she walks off.* -- Basandara, 00:58:57 06/02/03 Mon [1]
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