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Date Posted: 10/08/03 23:30
Author: patsy
Subject: 售後服務
In reply to: Anna 's message, "寫小說的問題" on 10/08/03 12:28

通常不回答創作問題，因為不是導師的話，不應胡亂教人。
Anna曾是我教的創作班學生，算是「售後服務」吧。:)
小說是否嘮叨其實難以判斷，尤其是對話，長氣角色的對白當然嘮叨，敘述語言也要配合整篇小說氣氛的。
我是怕悶的讀者，寫完一篇作品，總會刪到刪無可刪為止，起碼自己不覺嘮叨。然而，簡潔不等於好看，始終要自己多讀多寫慢慢摸索。
希望每個學生都青出於藍。

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